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First of the set from my Ski trip to Flaine, in the French Alps, the snow tracks on the tractors...

Edited curved in photoshop, apart from that, nothing,

Enjoy :)

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:iconniftygift:
The attention in a picture is drawed by forms we can understand like simple circles or polygons.
The pic it's pratically a succession of circles ,hexagons, and other more abstract forms that create a strong impact, leading the eye from left to right like a magnet.
The yellow on the right lighten the big concetration of heavy rusty iron.
The padlock acts as fulcrum, as a centre of gravity where all the lines are swallowed up.
The nice cross processing (I really like it) increase the dramatic power.
Some little problems with the focusing in the lower quarter.

High dynamism, superb balance of the forms.
Well, I love this image!;)
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:iconnot-bernard:
Nice image. The green is great, and the composition is collected. Sorry, I just fancied using alliteration, but yeah. I like this.

Why is the bottom less sharp than the top, by the way?

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:iconcitizenxerased:
That's amazing, I love the colours and sharpness. It's got a kind of grungy feel to it. I really like that! <3 :+fav:
:iconaobaob:
Good one! :D
Crop 1/4 off the top, and you've got a masterpiece ;)
:iconpwn4g3--p13:
Uh, to be honest...I don't know...I can't think of anything...

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Photography is subtractive art. First we throw away 90 percent of our photos, then crop, remove colour, remove noise, removing what is left bit by bit until we have only the reality we wish to show.
:iconpwn4g3--p13:
Thanks! thats really kind <3

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Photography is subtractive art. First we throw away 90 percent of our photos, then crop, remove colour, remove noise, removing what is left bit by bit until we have only the reality we wish to show.
:iconpwn4g3--p13:
Uh, thanks, but don't you mean 1/4 off of the bottom?

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Photography is subtractive art. First we throw away 90 percent of our photos, then crop, remove colour, remove noise, removing what is left bit by bit until we have only the reality we wish to show.
:iconcitizenxerased:
That's because I'm nice ;] Hehehe, and it's really cool, honestly, I really like it! :'D
:iconpwn4g3--p13:
Thanks :)

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Photography is subtractive art. First we throw away 90 percent of our photos, then crop, remove colour, remove noise, removing what is left bit by bit until we have only the reality we wish to show.

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PENTAX Corporation
PENTAX K100D
1/45 second
F/4.5
45 mm
800
Apr 13, 2009, 4:08:20 AM

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